Such a small mark can be especially troublesome, because mishandling the hyphen can confuse readers. We never want that. When multiple words independently modify a noun, do not use a...
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We need tag verbs that vocalize the dialogue, not describe it. We might occasionally use “whispered” or “shouted,” but most of the time we need “said.” Cheryl St. John says,...
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You may have read a writing tutorial that said you should always put the “he said” tag at the end of the dialogue. That’s fine for a few words, but...
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At no previous time has it ever been easier and more affordable to write and publish a book, making your message available to the world. But since everybody is doing...
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At a Donald Maass Intensive seminar in San Antonio, a writer on the front row was enjoying the view of the Riverwalk through the floor-to ceiling window. On the far...
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Crucial or Critical — While the two might be used interchangeably, critical works best for extreme danger and crucial for something very important. It may be crucial to pay bills...
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We should not overlook the important means that Jesus often used to communicate truth: storytelling. If you tell a man he should be forgiving, you might hear him say, “Yeah,...
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Whenever you run across “made his way,” “found himself,” “proceeded to,” “shot a look,” “caught a glimpse,” or “managed to,” you can probably find a better verb or verb phrase....
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The qualifiers like absolutely, all, always, completely, fully, quite, really, totally, truly, and very may seem important to the writer, but for the reader, they’re empty, void of much meaning...
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If an action is completed, “began” and “started” are obvious, adding no meaning, and should be avoided. He began to mumble the words with a mixture of sadness and stoic...
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