An eleven-year-old blind boy pulls himself over an eight-foot chain-link fence and falls to the ground. How would the boy describe the fall and the attention he received afterward? Great...
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Seminars are taught on “point of view,” the perspective from which a story is told. Because readers today want to identify with the main character in a scene, we should...
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A writer’s favorite set of descriptions quickly become overused, becoming cliché. We must challenge ourselves to dig deeply into a character’s emotion and visualize the actions that would make perfect...
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First-person storytelling tends to be more intimate, but we may still find places where we can deepen the point of view, with less objective telling. Great words from The Girl...
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A common mistake we make is writing “made his way,” which does no more than the better expression: “went.” If we want readers to see the difficulty of a journey,...
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Inside ancient Jerusalem, someone couldn’t see beyond the walls but had to anticipate what lay ahead by what came through the city gate. The Nazarene by Sholem Asch was first...
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Present tense is difficult to write. Even the highly skilled can easily drift into past-tense storytelling in which the immediacy of the present moment is lost. A similar problem exists...
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Readers want to feel the character's hope, not just be told about it. Great words from False Memory by Dean Koontz: Martie didn’t know how the doctor was able to...
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