Since most people are looking for God’s audible voice, they question whether he ever speaks to them. When they hear someone say, “God told me . . .” they feel inferior, wishing...
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Avoid looking like an amateur. You’ll see these mistakes in print, but you can do better. Please, never use multiple exclamation points!!!! Avoid single exclamation points except for one- or...
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Readers want a picture of Jesus’ world 2,000 years ago, but not in the language of his day. How would you describe Mary’s worship of the Father? Sholem Asch wrote...
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In the classics, long paragraphs were desirable. At one time, English teachers said a topic sentence should begin a paragraph, followed by several more, as if we hadn’t really achieved...
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We aren’t in high school English class where we couldn’t think what to write but just added words to make the required count. And we’re not living in the nineteenth...
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You can brighten your descriptions by giving details recognized by the senses other than the most-common “sight.” One of the best ways to practice that is to describe the world...
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Our words should grab attention quickly and make readers part of the action. We need to think in cinematic terms. Movie watchers will change channels if they aren’t immediately pulled...
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A memoir tells what happened, which easily loses focus on the emotion of the moment. Eleven-year-old Tom Sullivan took a flying leap off Suicide Rock to the water sixty feet...
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These paragraphs paint a beautiful picture of a blind girl’s confidence that everything will be all right, when readers already have seen enough of the threat of war to know...
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Ideas come from experiences. For writing inspiration, we need only pay better attention to our surroundings and find the extraordinary among what others would judge as ordinary. The more we...
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